Searcher Exec Summary - Requesting Feedback

Looking for feedback from the Searchfunder community.

Many times when reaching out for more information about a listing we connect with a broker who then asks for more information about us to see if we are a good fit. Almost like a resume of sorts. What do most searchers submit in these situations? We put together an Executive Summary type of document. I am attaching our initial draft here.

Any feedback would be greatly appreciated!

Thank you in advance.